Basically, the first adventure
The story starts with the day of a kid named Jay. Jay is the average kid with just as much interest in the outside world as others. Nothing seems interesting anymore one you reach the ages of a teenager. The once important lego piece is only looked at with disgust for possibly being able to give a kid so much fun. One really has to question how a simple block can keep you laughing for hours.
On this day, Jay goes home from school watching the winter snow come down slowly. His footsteps race past each house as he tires himself out. Yes, the world was slow but he wasn’t. Today would be different. Today he could get the adventure he wanted. Jay smiled at the luck of being a favorite nephew since he would finally get what he wanted from this world. A chance to see a new world.
Flashback–ten yrs ago
“Dad, why does uncle and aunty only come visit once a year”
“I’ll tell you when your older”
Flashback end–>flashback 7 yrs ago
“Dad, you promised you’d tell me and I’ve gotten nothing out of you”
“fine, lets just say that age doesn’t keep them down”
“what does that even mean?!!!?!?!?”
“Hmm..find out for yourself…”
Flashback end –>flashback 5 yrs ago
“finally, you guys are here. Where were you all this time”
“Just a friendly visit to some old friends…Hey Jay, I got something for you,…here “
His uncle always got him something whenever he came to visit and it would always be something weird. Sure, many things are wierd but these would be writing or stones that he had never seen before. This time, it was a clear bluish marble. Nothing out of the ordinary for once. Jay went up to complain to his uncle when he looked down at the marble again. He was sure the color wasn’t …green???. Jay kept looking at it and it seemed to glow every five second. The change from one color going to match the outside and suddenly to a slid block of another color. Quickly snapping back to earth..Jay asked the same question he asked every time…
“Where did you get this one”
“Like I said J.J., 16 is the big number….”
Flashback end
Today would be the day he finally got to know the secret. The secret behind his mysterious yet comforting family. The one he had spent his whole life questioning. Yes..because today he met two requirements. One was that he passes the age of 16 for exactly 12 days now and today was when his uncle and aunt finally came back to visit again…
(now obviously this story is horrible since I came up with it on the spot and the fact that nothing is revealed yet..mwuahaha. Anyways, you guys need to tell me how to fix this meaning continue on with story with super coolness or just end it right now and go with a new approach)
p.s. a color changing marble, what was i thinking!?!!?
I like it so far, but super coolness?